When working at a high-end publication, there is a certain standard to uphold. Not only are you writing to a specific audience, but you are also representing an entire publication along with its years and years of experience in the business.
Not only is this whole situation extremely confusing, but how on earth did someone make the mistake of spelling header as “heder”? There are so many things wrong with this piece, that we don’t even know where to start. But again, how did a publication like this not have someone proofreading this sample?